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24 March 09 : 12.04 AM

I'm getting more and more unsure of what I can produce creatively. The words just won't come. I keep thinking I'm telling it wrong or there is a better way to put it or a more appropriate synonym. I stare at this screen deleting and typing, deleting and typing. I am where I started.

How do I make transitions smooth? What are the right stage directions to express emotions or body language? Am I narrating more than showing? What are the subtle touches that would make it real?

I think I'm too real now. I don't know how else to say it.